the poem has this airy, vague attitude that you can carry on with friends around..the words 'as watery sunshine clears the palate' make a very powerful imagery... nice:)
thanks gauri! not sure what you mean by the first line, but it sounds good...grin.i think this is my first non-angsty poem in a while, lol.
I like "Wishes are horses", kinda strikes the right chord... Not that I'm nuts for poems, but for all its worth, nice poem.. :)
wow, blackest, thanks! it's worth a LOT, especially *because you're not nuts for poems! one of my pet peeves is how art/poetry have become unnecessarily exclusionary. thanks ey!
lovely.
thanks mesjay!
If wishes were horsesThen beggars would ride....What's the next lines? I looked it up online once but never got a satisfactory answer.Lovely poem. Pukete would be where you are now I assume?
thanks calli! i think that's all the phrase is, never heard of any continuation!pukete's a suburb of hamilton, where we live. on the way to me work with horses. :)
if wishes were horses i'd be able to write half as well as this.
>>>blushes with pleasure (and a good bit o embarrassment). thanks jd!
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the poem has this airy, vague attitude that you can carry on with friends around..
the words 'as watery sunshine clears the palate' make a very powerful imagery... nice:)
thanks gauri! not sure what you mean by the first line, but it sounds good...grin.
i think this is my first non-angsty poem in a while, lol.
I like "Wishes are horses", kinda strikes the right chord... Not that I'm nuts for poems, but for all its worth, nice poem.. :)
wow, blackest, thanks! it's worth a LOT, especially *because you're not nuts for poems! one of my pet peeves is how art/poetry have become unnecessarily exclusionary. thanks ey!
lovely.
thanks mesjay!
If wishes were horses
Then beggars would ride....
What's the next lines? I looked it up online once but never got a satisfactory answer.
Lovely poem. Pukete would be where you are now I assume?
thanks calli! i think that's all the phrase is, never heard of any continuation!
pukete's a suburb of hamilton, where we live. on the way to me work with horses. :)
if wishes were horses i'd be able to write half as well as this.
>>>blushes with pleasure (and a good bit o embarrassment). thanks jd!
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