where all the cars
are anted by this take off,
and memories
are numbed by the sea
free
as a slipstream
or driftwood
but not so lonely
let me be;
let us be.
Chp 905. TWENTY YEARS a blogger!
5 weeks ago
pondicherry
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It's amazing that you find lyrics to put across your thoughts. I used to be able to do that, not anymore. Very lucid and very real. If a litle bewildered and red!
I agree with the barefoot.
In general I like your poetry much more than the prose - youre a natural poet, I think.
However, could you please explain how on earth the 'us' in this poem isn't as lonely as driftwood?
Dude, its nice.
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