names hanging in nooses and faces all shot to hell
damn your flag. damn damn damn your flag.
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Shuakshuali
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There. You did it again - impart a world of meaning in a few lines. I don't know how you guys do it. Me, I'd probably rant on and on and.. on yet again about wars/ segregation/ discrimination/ black balling/ violence etc.. Good one yet again.
ranting is what i'd usually do. through all the anger, though sometimes something seems to find me, and the right words come. i increasingly feel like a lightning rod, waiting for the next strike.
When I first read this, I thought I was just having a blonde moment. Second/third readings with all the comments for assistance, and I'm still making like Melody in Josie and the Pussycats :((
dunno what the others have read in this, but to me its just me spitting on the beliefs (religion, politics, race) that are killing people. quite literal, actually!
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There. You did it again - impart a world of meaning in a few lines. I don't know how you guys do it. Me, I'd probably rant on and on and.. on yet again about wars/ segregation/ discrimination/ black balling/ violence etc..
Good one yet again.
thanks!
ranting is what i'd usually do. through all the anger, though sometimes something seems to find me, and the right words come. i increasingly feel like a lightning rod, waiting for the next strike.
good damn it!!!
for some weird reason your poem reminded me of the Ku Klux Klan :D
@blind: heh. thanks damn it!
@mos-a: oddly enough i know what you mean!
When I first read this, I thought I was just having a blonde moment. Second/third readings with all the comments for assistance, and I'm still making like Melody in Josie and the Pussycats :((
dunno what the others have read in this, but to me its just me spitting on the beliefs (religion, politics, race) that are killing people. quite literal, actually!
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